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by Jenny Olabode
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I LOVE THIS ARTICLE, HOWEVER, THERE ARE SEVERAL WORDS THAT NEED TO BE REPLACED. PLEASE REREAD YOUR ARTICLE AND CORRECT THE FOLLOWING: and 'won’t' to, SHOULD BE and 'want' to...that pull 'the' tight SHOULD BE that pull 'too' tight...your hair come loose, than it fallout, WOULD BE BETTER READ your hair comes a loose, rather than fall out...'protein hair' loss and needs proper nutrition to grow. SHOULD BE 'protein and hair' loss needs proper nutrition to grow. THANK YOU AND REALLY APPRECIATED THIS ARTICLE SO MUCH. I AM GOING TO USE EITHER THE OILS OR THE PRODUCTS YOU SUGGESTED. BLESS YOU JENNY!If an editor was reviewing thishe/she would do exactly what you have done. And you did it so pleasantly!
Darlene, I think you are absolutly disrespectfull for making corrections on an article well written. You had no right whatsoever. Why don't you try writting your own and lets see how it fares. You walking dictionary!This reply is part of the reason it is so difficult to involve some children and adults in getting an education. It is so sad that offense is taken when suggestions or corrections are offered. This error(won't instead of want) was the first thing I noticed and I almost involuntarily make a decision this was not a product for me. This language error probably has nothing to do with the product but I question the business savvy. Darlene, if I were interviewing you for a job I probably wouldn't hire you because I would probably see your attitude sitting proud and tall on your shoulders. Lighten up. This is not a criticism it is just a comment.
This article is so poorly written that I question its credibility.
What's the problem with making suggestions on a poorly written article? It has a way of undermining the totality and credibility of the article. I'm certain the author of this site means well and is knowledgeable about her information, as well as the woman who made suggestions on the corrections. A well-written article has no misspellings or grammatical errors. I'd take the author's advice nonetheless. But, constructive criticism is just that: Constructive.
It did get the message across
Very well spoken, I must say. Very well spoken.
I think it is alright to correct an article which contains errors. It benefits the writer in making his/her site more professional. I don't believe the person bringing the corrections to the attention of the author had any malice in doing so!
this was not a grammer test, so leave it be
The article was helpful, but I agree that corrections needed to be made. There is absolutely nothing wrong with constructive criticism. Learning from mistakes is how we become more efficient in all aspects of life.
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